Too many adjectives and adverbs. You may need to add or expand: Something you know but have forgotten to tell the reader; perhaps the age of the main character. More specific descriptive information that shows instead of tells; instead of describing a man as old, describe his white hair, slow gait and mottled hands. Some stories even end up in the same place they started. For example, in The Wizard of Oz, Dorothy starts out in Kansas, travels to Oz in a cyclone and ends up back in Kansas.
In your final edit: Check for grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes. Ensure you have no continuity errors. Pay particular attention to the first and last lines of any section or scene. HOW TO writtory, introduction, we are all storytellers. And story is all around us. After all, what is a TV show or a movie? What is a book? What do you tell your parents when they ask, "How was your day, dear?" You guessed it - a story. Then grab a pencil and paper, or open up a new file on your computer, and away we go! Main Character. The person, animal or thing your story is about, every story starts with a main character. Rewriting and Editing Your Creative Writing Project, rewriting and editing helps to tighten up your work. But it can be difficult what to chop and when to stop may not be clear, and you may change your mind more than once during the process. Find a postcard, photograph or painting depicting two or more people and write a story about them. Look at any object and write about it where does it come from, who does it belong to, who might want it? Remember to show not tell think about how to dramatise what youre writing about and create visual images. Start somewhere else and get going again if you become stuck on a particular passage.